Swordsman (Haiku)

A swordsman changing
to give his heart a fresh start
leaves his sword behind

Sometimes change requires relinquishing your defences and discovering a new way of living (and loving).

9 thoughts on “Swordsman (Haiku)”

Grace says:

January 24, 2023 at 1:15 pm

Beautifully done, Bree. Truly enjoyed this one, and the footnote. Amazing write as always 🤍🤍

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1. Secret Bree says:
  
  January 24, 2023 at 6:40 pm
  
  You make me smile Grace. Thank you for your encouragement
  
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johnlmalone says:

January 27, 2023 at 8:25 pm

so very true: it reflects my recent experience; I am still learning —

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Benjamin Grossman says:

January 28, 2023 at 4:26 am

Beautiful!

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1. Secret Bree says:
  
  January 28, 2023 at 10:10 am
  
  Nah, thank you so much 🙂
  
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  1. Benjamin Grossman says:
    
    February 7, 2023 at 12:34 pm
    
    🙂
    
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Kritika says:

March 21, 2023 at 2:49 am

Agree with you. I need your poetry tonight. So you might find a lot of comments. 😀

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1. Secret Bree says:
  
  April 5, 2023 at 9:20 pm
  
  💜 I understand. Sometimes you need to hear/read certain words 💜
  
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  1. Kritika says:
    
    April 11, 2023 at 2:24 am
    
    Yes!
    
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