
He’s a red light
Nothing good
ever comes
from loving men
like him
I need to put on the breaks
as my heart starts to race
I should stop
I really should stop
He’s a red light
I nudge the accelerator
shutting my eyes
keep driving
straight into his arms –
destined to become
a tragedy of mangled hearts
I should stop
I really should stop
I flatten the accelerator to the floor
Sound credit to weebrain
Of course there is usually a crash at the end with this sort of driving!
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Haha, you absolutely speak the truth David 😆
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Wow!! I so loved this, Bree! A perfect capture of “the heart wants what the heart wants – no matter what your mind is telling you!!” Loved your line – a tragedy of mangled hearts! Seems the heart loves to “Gamble” and believes in “the meant to be” and is willing to accept that it may be – “Only For Awhile!!”
Seems the heart in your verses has the optimistic belief of “Next Time!” And has mended from past experiences with a “Mosaic Heart!” love it, love it!! I’m hearing Whispers! LOL 😊💕🌹
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Oh wow, I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed it Chuck! 🙂🙂🙂 Haha, glad you heard some creative whispers on the wind
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Yes, I always love it when your words whisper to me!! Hope you are well, happy and healthy!!
Fun plans for the weekend! 😊💕🌹
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oh dear, relatable once again Bree, haha, drive safely :p
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Haha! Your comment has made me have a little laugh. Buckle up Babe, it’s gonna a wild ride (not really, but let’s pretend).
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hahahahahah :)))
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Wow Bree, no better way to depict the descrepency of the head and the heart.
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Well this is encouraging to read. Thanks Cassa 😊
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Excellent. You should have a radio show. 🙂
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That’s very kind of you to say! I hardly know how to reply 😅
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It’s the sensitivity and expressiveness in the voice, Bree. Some sort of podcast. 🙂
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“destined to becomee…a tragedy of mangled hearts” 🔥…the way you said “I should stop…I really should stop”…you’re very expressive, Bree…emotions can be felt…and then the ending…A question – why don’t your share your spoken word on IG as well?…your voice is so beautiful?…just asking coz I’m wondering 🤨
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I’ll DM you 😀
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Nice, nice, nice. Effective. Effecting. You really do a good job of capturing emotions in your words.
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Thank you 🙂🙂🙂 I try
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Welcome 🙂
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oouuuhh, this is so good
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You’re too kind! Thank you 💜💜💜💜💜
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