By Kritika and Bree Leto
touched by freedom
while inhaling the tranquil sea
the bikini clad body, electrified by a need
eyes looking at eyes filled with an awaited desire
the water between his hands and her breasts
aroused the fire
the wind in her hair
salt on his lips
earthy elements beheld in tandem
they were waves in motion inching towards the shore
closer, closer the pull to be closer
the primal need became a roar
they needed to touch and do so much more
a gust of lust, a churning ache
the two connecting amongst the break
and drowning in each other
under the love found there
between sex and salty water
and the tranquil sea air
I do love this sultry poem. It was lovely writing with you Kritika 💜 (Heart).
Secret Thoughts Within 
A salty and sultry collaboration guys … now I need to go for a swim …
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Haha, perfect comment Ivor 🤣🤣🤣
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ah…a stormy gust I must say!
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Indeed!
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That was a passionate read! Excellent.
they were waves in motion inching towards the shore – this is very smart!
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Thanks so much Vignesh 🙂
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Feeling hot hot hot 🔥❤️
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It appears I didn’t reply to your comment Cassa. It’s ended up below. Basically… Thanks 💜
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Haha, singing that tune now… Feeling hot hot hot 💃💃💃💃
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lovely with passion and flow you two! I had to re=follow you. Not sure what happened . Excellent!!😎😎
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Thanks Cindy! Lovely to hear you enjoyed this piece. Also, don’t worry, I’ve been having all sorts of problems too!
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You’re so welcome!!
I’m going to behind to have more getting a new computer since I got water in mine. Yikes…
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No! Oh i’ve had that happen before Cindy. I hope everything was backed up or kept on a cloud.
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Thanks a lot!! Me too💕
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“gust of lust”, nice word play. Feels nice on the tongue as it was..
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Oh thanks so much! I think lust can feel like a gust of wind. Intense, enough to move us… but often temporary and whirling away.
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A delightfully pleasing tease 🙂
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Glad to hear it drew you in David. A great encouragement for us
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Ohhhh i love this!
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Haha, glad to hear it. It was a LOT of fun writing this with Kritika 😁
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Glad to hear that!
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Lovely sultry and sensual write. 💜
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Oh thank you so much much 😊
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Oh, I super love this and so much more 😉 Always an honor for me to write with you ST (hearts)
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Nawwww, I’m glad to hear it Kritika 🙂
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How to repost it? The option is not available on the reader.
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I hope you worked it out 🙂
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Yes. Would post it soon. Trying to resume the writing again.
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What a salt-licked collaboration! Beautiful verse! ❤️
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Nawwww, thanks! I really did love this one.
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❤️
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