
I covert nothing more fervently
than to feel your ink chamber
in my hand
move it back and forth
enjoy the precision of each stroke
over my awaiting pages
I want to memorise
your unique barrel shape
the exact placement
for that perfect thrust of ink
I want to learn new techniques
watching your skilled tip at work
I relish the touch of that nib
pressing down on my parchment
straight
bold
STRONG
Spread your ink everywhere
spill it over me
on my hand
in my hair
a drip on my lips
Leave stains on my page
and when I’m alone
I’ll look over them
trace them with my fingertips
Your pen is
completely captivating me
I want nothing more
than to hold your pen
I will confess, I had far too much fun creating this cheeky piece. 🦊 Thank you for joining me in this ridiculousness; I hope you found it as delightfully scandalous as I did. Shout out to my beta readers and all the laughs we had.
And yes, I couldn’t believe my luck when I stumbled across the feature photo while researching the anatomy of a pen. ‘Thrust Device’… really? It’s just too good to be true. I obviously took it as a sign this poem wanted to be written 😉
Originally published 23 July 2021
you naughty girl you hehe as for me, I only saw a pen and nothing else hehe
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Haha, and I tamed it down too 😏 Gotta control that inking urge sometimes 😂
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I wrote one which I was afraid was too bold but now you lead and we follow!
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Haha, oh no, what have I done! We can’t have a room full of talented poets writing fantastically scandalous poetry… It’ll get too steamy in here and no one will be able to see! 😆 Clearly there is no stopping (helping) us.
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You my friend have started a revolution! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Thrust device… haha. So much to love here, really unique and playful.
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I know right, how could I not write this poem with such worthy inspiration 😆
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One question though… do you really want all that sticky ink in your *hair*? 🙂
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I guess it depends on the quality of the ink 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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hahahah you naughty Bree… i love this, though
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😂😂😂 It is a bit naughty, but so so much fun to write. I laughed too many times while thinking of different lines 🤣
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i too was laughing Bree, reading it and imagining you writing it as well
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loved this! probably one of the best, i’ve ever read, when it comes to erotica.
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Oh wow thanks Srijan 🙂 One can never underestimate the power of a… pen.
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haha, indeed.
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Fantastically penned! 😂
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😂😂😂😉💜
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Love this! 👏👏
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Haha, thanks Lucy 😃
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brilliant 🤍💋
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I’m glad to hear you think so 😉💜
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😉
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a terrific piece of writing: reminds me of my ‘Red Pencil Sharpener’ which I think I posted here a few years ago
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Why thank you John. Glad to hear you have also been writing about… Drawing implements 😉
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well, sharpening instruments 🙂
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Haha, just as essential for a life well written
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I love the phallic innuendoes 🙂
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Haha, don’t we all John, don’t we all 😆
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Love it 😍💚
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😁💜
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You are Tinto Brass of poetry. You made a weapon look graceful. 😉😂
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😂 Haha, I have never been called Tinto Brass before 😂 But thank you? I think? 😅😆
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Yeah. Take it as compliment.
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I planned to 😏😆
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what pen?
come again
ha ha ha
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🤣
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I 💗 a scandalous poem 😅🚿 they need a fan emoji. I wonder what “sex” wrote the labels for the parts. Nothing like a “good” pen! 🤭
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😆 So happy to hear 😉 I know right… The anatomy is hilarious! I only ever like writing with a good quality pen, it’s just not worth wasting your time on something that doesn’t feel right in your hand and on your page (oh my goodness, I must stop).
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I’ll be looking forward to the next time you “spring” into action and let the “ball point” loose with a full “cartridge”! Lol you are a “naughty influence”! 😏😆 well that certainly was fun. 🥳
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I think I might just have fallen in love with you a little bit 😆👏 I let those ones go because I thought it might have been too much… So to have you use them in a comment… Made my day Elle, made my day 👏👏👏😂
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Bwaahhaaa I’m usually not cheeky but if you lead the way, I’ll plow away after! 😲🤭
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Oh! Wait I meant I’ll play along… ahhh no a not that either… 🤦♀️
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Bahahahaha, fantastic stuff 😆
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😂😂😂😏👌
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💙
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🙂
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Haha. Great double entendre. Someone has been extremely naughty!
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That feature photo was perfect. It was meant to be indeed. Thrust device 😂😂😂
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Haha, I know! I really couldn’t believe my luck… I almost didn’t believe it was real at first, it’s just too perfect 😆
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Oh yes it was meant to be 😂😂😂
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Haha, thanks Shweta 😆😆😆 It’s fun to be naughty sometimes.
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Oh yes indeed
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This is very clever and cute Bree. A pleasing read 🙂
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Thanks Vignesh, glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Penned!! Beautifully. I suppose you’re good in marketing….😄
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😏 It’s always nice to have your work appreciate 😆
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🤣🤣 Love it!! 😁🖤
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😁 I would have been really disappointed if you didn’t 😆
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😁😁😁🖤
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A joyous reading…..😜🤣 A very happy ending too…😉
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Haha, you’re making me laugh Cassa 😆😅
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Super well done! Part sensual and part cheeky. Shakespeare would applaud you for using these metaphors to get pass the censors in his time. Very clever!!!!
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Thanks Ben 🙂 Haha, oh that is a fun thought (about Shakespeare)! Thanks for appreciating 😁
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You’re welcome. It sure is. Great work! 🙂
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‘Strip that down for me?’ Attaching the image does explains the naughtiness attached and fantastic creative piece ST. I adore the style very much. One of my favourites now. 😉
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😆 Oooooo, I’m glad to hear that Kritika. Your comments and support are always so appreciated by me 💜💜💜💜
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Wow.. This is so smartly done! Naughty Bree.. 😂😂. Perfect picture too!😉❤️😝
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😆 Haha, thanks Diana… Sometimes it’s fun to be a bit naughty 😏
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How did I miss this poem of yours Ms Secrets….Damn, your hand on the pen….nib pressing down on your parchment….spreading ink all over your page….good you put the image of a pen just to make it clear….like very clear 😂….there’s a reason I call you a talented writer….a unique poem 🔥
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Haha, glad you enjoyed this unique poem 😉😆
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Absolutely love the naughtiness and mischief you portrayed here.
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It’s a bit of fun isn’t it 😆 Thanks for enjoying this mischievous piece 😁
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I agree and enjoyed it 💕
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Wow! I’m blushing! I never knew pens could think like this! 🌞
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Haha, thanks Lisa. It’s a bit of fun 😆
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I’m glad I found your blog today and found this masterpiece. That’s exactly how erotic poems are written! 👏👏👏 I’m blown away by the subject and how you played with the incentives. You’re outstanding.
Nowadays, I’m discovering erotic content as I want to start writing it!..
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Oh my, thank you for sharing your thoughts. I’m glad you are inspired to write something, there’s no greater compliment than to have others be inspired by your work. Thank you 🙂
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I actually tried writing a poem. I don’t know how well I did… Might share with you later!
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If anyone sees this link, make sure you read Tom’s poem. It’s fantastically fun and with the right amount of spice 👏
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The thrust device seems to have faded into nothingness. I wonder if it is age related?
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Bahahahahaha, oh my goodness Peter 😂😂😂 Your comment had made my day 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Perhaps your thrust device needs a service? Someone to give it a bit of skilled attention might bring it back to life? (seriously, this is hilarious 😆)
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