
Unspoken chemistry
always there between us
simmering under the surface our friendship –
we’ve never crossed the line
we’re always one careful step away
But, tonight you’re sitting closer
indecision in your eyes
and when you look at me like this
I just want to feel your kiss
Is this the night?
Is this the night friends become lovers?
Spend the evening exploring each other
in your room, under the covers?
You’re the most important person in my life
we can’t afford to mess this up
but maybe we’re missing out on something
better than what we have now
So, when I look at you like this
do you want to give in and take the risk?
Is this the night?
Is this the night we change to lovers?
Spend the evening exploring each other
in your room, under the covers?
I think I’m ready for this night
my body told me long ago
and while my heart told me yes,
my brain kept saying no
I can see it in your eyes
although you try not let it show
if this is something that you want too
then please just let me know
Is this the night?
Is this the night we become lovers?
Spend the evening exploring each other
in your room, under the covers?
Oh this is a tough one…
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Yep, that tension, that inner debate… Tricky.
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I felt your every word in that edge of decision.
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🙂👌
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Time will reveal everything …
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So true Ivor, so true!
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Love this my friend – brilliantly written as always 🖤🖤
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Nawwww thanks Charmer. I appreciate your comment as always 😉💜
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You’re always welcome my friend 😊🖤
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Beautifully written. So was it the night?!
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Haha, great question. I’m sure it was and wasn’t for a whole lot of people 😆
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Lol! 😆
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Left to the reader’s imagination….was it the night ? 😀
A beautiful piece Bree ❤️
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Some things are best left for the readers imagination 😉😆 Thanks Radhika 💜
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I so get the dilemma having been in a similar situation!!! Really beautifully written!!! 👏
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💜 Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one, it means a lot
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OMG, Bree! This is so Magical and Moving!! Your words really touched me and I heard more! A life beyond just words! Would love to share???? 😍😁👍✨🎁💕🌹🌹
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Haha, email it to me Chuck 👍 I’ll be interested to see what which approach you take.
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As a long time member of the Cheerleading Team – I think you will love your poem/post here even more!!!
😁😘🎁💕🌹
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I’ll make sure I check my emails soon Chuck 💜
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i love how sensual it is and yet subtle. ✨
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I’m so glad to hear it! 🙂
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I completely agree with ashmita
Great work!
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Thank you Akshita, I always enjoy reading your thoughts
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This one has some simmering tension. Good job!
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Thanks Ben… my work here is done haha.
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Welcome!!! 🙂 Done for now … but you’ll be at it again.
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I think it was not night that’s why you could imagine so excellent! Well shared 🙂
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Haha, I like your thoughts on this Priti and what the situation might have been. Thanks for reading 💜
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It’s pleasure of mine stay blessed 🤗🥰
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Oh, Bree! I could dance in your poems. Such a lovely piece 💕 ✨
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Oh, far out this is an encouragement for me to read. Thank you so very much Shinela 💜
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Really good one, Bree! 🌸
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Thank you so much Mia 💜
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Heavens beautiful
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Oh thank you so much 💜
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You are welcome!
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What a piece! Written with so much passion the reader can’t help but get immersed in the reading, curious to know what’s on the next line.
Beautifully captured. This is a piece I would love to read again and again. It reminds me of many moments.
This piece is a masterpiece!
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Benjamin, what high praise you have lavished on this piece. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.
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You are welcome!
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Beautifully written, lovely 💜
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I’m so glad you think so VB
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you always rock!!
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