
I treasure the solitude of standing in the waves
and looking at a mirrored horizon.
It lifts my soul and reminds me
that there are so many directions
my heart can go.
Some thoughts need to come out
I treasure the solitude of standing in the waves
and looking at a mirrored horizon.
It lifts my soul and reminds me
that there are so many directions
my heart can go.
Beautiful! β€οΈ
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Thank you so much Radhika π
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Got a map?
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Haha, nope. I’ve never found maps particularly helpful.
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Into the blue then.
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Haha, yes.
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So simply beautiful and inspiring Secrets π
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Oh thank you VB! I always find nature, and particularly the ocean inspiring π
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Yes, I do too! nature makes you feel in a way humble and at the same time in sync with the universe π
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Yes! πππ
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Lovely!!
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π Thank you Aashi.
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Short. Lovely. Hopeful. Inspiration poetry!
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Happy to read these comments and observations Ben, thanks.
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Short and on point!π₯Ίβ€οΈ
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Oh, Secrets, I so loved this!! Such a great capture of walking in the surf and feeling the waves coming in and then receding while in the solitude and beauty and wonder of the shoreline! It leaves you with such a peaceful – easy feeling in your soul to be wading at the shoreline. Bellissimo, Secrets Bellissimo!!!
Oh, you know what would really be cool with this? Having the beginning with one of those white noises of the surf before you start recording and then lower it a bit and then ending with an extended ending with the same sounds as the beginning with maybe the sound of a seagull?? Hmmm? Sorry. I just love listening and visualizing! Just me, Dear!
Hope you are having a great day!!
xoxox ππππΉβ¨β¨π
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I’ve glad you captured the feeling of this piece.
Unfortunately I lack the recording talent/knowledge to add any sound effects etc. to my spoken word pieces. My current process is extremely simple haha. It is a great idea though π
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Hmmm, I will have to check with a friend that is an expert!
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Wow this is gorgeous.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck π
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It’s always a pleasure and a joy to read your words/posts and share with followers, Dear! Hope you are doing well??
xoxox ππππΉ
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I am doing well Chuck π I’m currently finalising some pieces to post/publish around Valentine’s Day π
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We be looking forward to those!! Yeah!
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Lovely!π
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Oh thank you π
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