I watched the sun slip behind the mountains,
Ending its day with a fiery display.
I wished that you were with me
Holding my hands in yours,
Heating them with your breath
Sending me confident smiles and corner-eyed looks.
I wished you were with me
Wrapping a blanket around us
And pulling me close to your side
Warming me with your body and words.
I wished you were with me
In the twilight hours
When everything seems possible
Where dreams are given heartbeats and come to life.
I watched the first stars come out
Singing their evening song in light
And I wished
For you.
Lovely. I like these small details:
“Holding my hands in yours,
Heating them with your breath
Sending me confident smiles and corner-eyed looks.”
They really created some instant impact.
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😊 Thank you Ben.
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Welcome 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Velu 😊
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Beautiful that you remember my name ahah!
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Short of words. Dreams givsn heartbeats. Sold on this line.
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Thanks Nishabd 😊
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And I hope those wishes weren’t in vain!
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I hope for our protagonist that they weren’t either 😊
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Very well written!!!
Don’t forget to Glee and spread Sparkles ✨
-Nani 💖
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Thank you so much 😊
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“When everything seems possible
Where dreams are given heartbeats and come to life”…..simply amazing…..what a beautiful poem you’ve written…..
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Thank you Navin 😊
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You’re welcome 😊
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Romantic aura.
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Thank you Kritika, your two words have summarised this piece perfectly.
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My pleasure always 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Oh, this is so beautiful and romantic. The longing and the yearning is so raw withing your words. Wow.
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Thank you for sharing these beautiful words about this piece Rishika 💜💜💜
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❣️❣️❣️❣️
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💜💜💜💜
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Well crafted!
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Oh thank you Aashi 😊😊😊
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Always love the way your words reach out to my heart with whispers and images of love!!
Bellissimo, Sweet Poet, Bellissimo!!
😊😁💖💕🌹
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You are lovely Chuck. Thanks for always believing in me.
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You are Too Sweet, Dear Bree!!! I always believe in, appreciate and find you to be Wonderful!!!!
As the person I know and love and as the Sweet Poetess you are!!! I love remembering our collaborations too!! Please keep those words reaching out to my heart!!!!
Chuck 😊😁😘💖💕🌹
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