100 word story
I had a dream last night. We were sitting side-by-side on an elegant velvet couch. We passed unspoken words between us while looking into each other’s eyes. I succumbed to my cacoethic way of wanting you and I placed my lips on yours. You responded instantly and passionately. We shifted and moved together under saccharine kisses and tender touches. It wasn’t lustful, it was purer than that; a wholly uncontaminated moment in time, with each caress revealing our hearts. I woke up dazed. I’m not sure where it came from. I’m slightly embarrassed, but I confess… I enjoyed every second.
Edit: Forgot to add a shout out to my friend Nick for his help with one especially tricky word 💜
This is good! 👏👏👏
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Oh my goodness John… It was one of those ones that I kept editing and getting frustrated with. If I changed one word, I had to change others to keep the word count. In the end, I heard Lia ‘Just post it’ 😆
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You pulled it off and that’s all that matters. Isn’t it nice when you change one “little” thing, it screws everything up? To us, at least 😆
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😊 and yep.
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Ah thanks for this shoutout m’love. So word count? Whazzup gal 🤓
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Every now and then I try to write something in 100 words. It’s always challenging 😅
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Ah cool!!! yes constraints in writing can be a lot of fun. :)) xoxoxo
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I found your blog as a co-nominee for the Sunshine Blogger Award nominated by Introverted Ela. You have a great blog and following you for the same. Do visit and review my blog.
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That’s very cool Piyush. I wondered how you came across me. Shall do.
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💜💜
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Spent all my phone battery time looking up “cacoethetic” – thinking it was chocolate-related lol (and yes, somewhat: “inadvisable/bad habit”)
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Dang it! hit send before done. Anyhoo, had to come all the way home to use desktop and read the rest!! 😂 Well… very romantic. 😏🙏🍫💕
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😆😆😆 I’m sorry! I wish it was chocolate related!
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Charming read
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Thanks Shantanu!
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My absolute pleasure
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Great piece!
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Thanks Harsh
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“It wasn’t lustful, it was purer than that; a wholly uncontaminated moment in time, with each caress revealing our hearts” this is pure tenderness and i so adore it
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Thanks Beautiful Mich 😊
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💞💞💞
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Nice: “a wholly uncontaminated moment in time”
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Thanks, glad this line stood out, I took a while on it 💜
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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