I think you might love her
and although I’ve never met her
I think I might hate her
I often wish I was her
because you always talk about her
and I know all your dreams centre around her
I wonder if you can move on from her?
It is possible to live without her
simply pick me instead of her!
The happiness of you and me depends on her
the choice lies with her —
our future begins and ends with her
Experimental Poetry from me. I wanted to end each line with the same word – in this case, ‘It ends with Her‘ (see what I did there). I also wanted to write in Tercets… I think it managed to make it work to some degree. I don’t think I’ll try it again 😜
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Very good. I do think you should try again! ☺️
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Haha, you are very kind 🤣🤣🤣
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I am yes, very! 😁
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It works. Creative title for the piece. Well done.
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Thanks Ben. Not sure about this one, but creating something new is always fun.
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Yes. you did good. I like this. It’s an entertaining piece.
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This is cool. I enjoyed it.
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That’s nice to hear. It felt awkward to write, but I stuck with it.
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That is super. Don’t think just do it!
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