
I gave you all my love
you gave me all your lies –
sweet poison on your lips
I miss you pretending that you cared
make-believing that you loved me –
sweet poison in my ears
I see you with her now
loving from your whole being –
sweet poison to my heart
I envy the way you are together
the bitter sin fills me up –
sweet poison overflows my cup
A while back a poet ran a competition asking people to write about the seven deadly sins. I thought on the idea for a while (like a long while), but I’m finally publishing this one. I focused on the idea of envy or jealousy, which I feel is a poison to the soul.
I have thoughts of teenage years, how a love was lost then envy and jealousy flittered as lights, until I looked and saw another smile at me. Life changing moments. How ofgten they seemed to occur. Or is it just my imagination of a fading memory?
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Your comment is poetry itself David 💜
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Alas that sweet poison… loving the audio!!! ❤️
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The audio was a last minute addition. I’m glad you enjoyed it VB 💜
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I LOVED it, lovely Bree!!!!!! 💜
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Sadly the sweet poison is not sweet after all. Loved your composition Bree!
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Absolutely. I’m glad to hear you enjoyed it Radhika 😊
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Wow, Bree! This is powerful, moving and full of emotion! Love it, love it!! Bellissimo, My Dear!
😍💕🌹
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Thank you so much Chuck 🙂
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It’s always a pleasure to read and share you posts with followers!
Hope you have a great weekend!! 😊💕🌹
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Awww i felt the angst Bree..
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And very well described. And just as beautifully recited. Well done.
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Thanks so much George 🙂 Very kind of you to say
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