
My life was numb
living through the hours in a disconnected haze
nothing to look forward to
except a colourless sunrise
Then you came along
and with you
I felt something
seen and safe
I felt something
no longer alone
It didn’t last
now you’re gone
but I’m no longer numb
I still feel something
a pain which scalds inside my veins
burning through me
I don’t ignore the agony
It’s twisted
but
the terrible way you treated me
brought me back from the grave
and burnt me back to life
Wonderful, Bree! Resurrected and back from the blaze – stronger, better, faster and shaking off the ashes Phoenix style 💪🔥
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Thanks Gorgeous 😊🔥
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This is magnificent.
I’m in Awe really.
The last lines hit home. I don’t know if it was written from this perspective but I feel sometimes wrong people make us realise how strong we are otherwise.
It’s just so beautiful ❤️
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Oh thank you so much! I loved reading your thoughts on this piece Rashmi 💜
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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I hope you are staying safe, My Dear! I worry about you in a country that has now changed its position on Covid – now it’s let’r Rip? Really! Yikes!!
😊💕🌹
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Ah, the opening of boarders was all linked to vaccination targets etc. Now that certain targets have been reached, things are ‘opening up’. We’ll see how it all unfolds.
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Well, Hope you approach it with caution, My Dear! People tend to cave for business interests and reasons and health take a back seat. Hope all is well with you, Bree! 😊💕🌹
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Thanks for your concern Chuck 🙂 I’m doing well 💜
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From numbness to be able to feel pain is indeed a progress…in its ironic way.
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Exactly, you hit the nail on the head Cassa 💜
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awe-mazing bree<3
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Such encouraging words Akshita, i’m glad you enjoyed this piece 💜
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Oh my, I love this poem…this is really deep & intense…numbness & pain…and the last two lines…I have no words…
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And I have no words to reply with… You are very kind Navin 🙂
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Beautiful emotional lines ! Sometimes someone special makes us feel our life new way! Well shared 💕🎉😊
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Thanks Priti 💜
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It’s my pleasure 💓😊🎉
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What a stunning write, Bree. Last two lines, epic. 🔥💙
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Oh thank you Jeff, I’m so glad to hear you liked it 😄
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You’re welcome, Bree. Always. I loved it. ☺️
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Such a fantastic ending! Love that!
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Gotta rise from those ashes and find the light! Thanks Ben.
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You’re welcome! Good idea! Keep pushing that little bit more!
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