By Jared Winchester and Bree Leto
Image animation by Jared Winchester
Iβll write on pages in blue fading black,
rip off my white angel wings for you.
I told God I felt lust so I am damned,
I will fall but I’ll have you to me soothe.
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I’ve forsaken all else and my celestial light
to be with you and to never be alone.
I have not lost something you can’t replace;
behold my allegiance I give a throne.
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I will etch you onto the pages of my soul
watch you breathe life into me again.
You’ll scratch into our hearts a united chorus
so the both of us will always reign.
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My words are now transgressions
I confess it is scripture in my soul
that we both will be lost as well
as have for us a life we can control.
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Writing on these pages in blue and black
caught in the ink passion that binds,
I’m in ecstasy calm filled with no regret;
in my new heaven I leave the old behind.
Jared and I really dug into the intense emotions and images while creating this poem, but we had a blast doing it! Thanks Jared… it’s always fun to share the creative process with a friend.
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Great collaboration you two!! Bravo!
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Thank you so much Chuck π
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My pleasure and my cheerleading duties too! LOL
xoxox ππππΉ
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Bahahahaha π€£π€£π€£π€£
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The collab is giving distinct flavor of emotions throughout
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Thanks Nishabd π
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Lovely!!
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Thank you for saying so Akshita π
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Absolutely amazing poetry and the artwork…captivating. Collaboration sharpens the skills…always a beautiful result. Great job. Kudisπππ
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Oh Suzette… How encouraging to read! Your right, they do sharpen the skills! Glad you liked this creation π
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My pleasure.β€
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Nicely done collaboration.
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Thanks Elle, I always appreciate hearing your thoughts.
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Youβre most welcome. π
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Wowza!!! Bringin on the HEAT, Bree!! Love love love it!!π₯π₯π₯
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Haha, thanks Diana. We had a lot of fun shaping this, so happy to hear you love it π
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Nice collaboration….”I told God I felt lust so I am damned, I will fall but Iβll have you to me soothe.”….Captivating
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Oh thank you Navin π I’m pleased to say that Jared was the master crafter of the lines you pulled out. He is a talented one.
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You’re welcome, Secrets….you must know that I liked the whole piece….quite intense, deep n hot….it’s simply flowing β¨π«
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Haha, glad we hit all the right notes. I was thinking that you and Jared would probably really appreciate each other’s styles. He had been around for a lot longer than me, but recently started a new blog.
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You both definitely did…. Interesting to know about Jared….will check his blog…longer & newer has no meaning to me though…the click, the hit, the depth & the touch are more important in my world ππ
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I just adore your collabs – this one is no exception ππ€
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That works out well, because I adore YOU! Glad you enjoy the collaborative efforts of a couple of casual poets ππ
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Aw, you’re too kind! And I certainly do! ππ€
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This is an amazing collab, Secrets (and Jared)!!!! Superbly intense π
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Oh yay! Thanks so much VB π
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Beautiful β¨
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Thank you so much for saying so π
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This is amazing. Loved reading this
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Oh, I’m so glad to hear that πππ
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wild, passionate and transgressive; great image too π I loved it !!
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Thank you so much John πβΊοΈ
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Intense. Lots of strong lines. And a powerful ending! Very cool collab (which has a distinct direction)!
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AMAZING! Really impressive collab π
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Oh thank you so much!
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I love the vibe it gives me. β₯οΈ And the image animation is so cool!
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Oh thank you so much Shinela ππππ
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