Without him,
I’m uncertain
what I would do.
All the world
would fade into grey
and ash would fill my life.
How would I face
the long days
and eternity of the night?
Without him
Some thoughts need to come out
Some thoughts need to come out
Without him,
I’m uncertain
what I would do.
All the world
would fade into grey
and ash would fill my life.
How would I face
the long days
and eternity of the night?
Secret Thoughts Within
This poem makes me think in Grey, Blue & Red….well written, Secrets
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Wow, I love the way you have described your experience with this poem Navin 🙂
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It’s an amazing poem Bree 😊
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Thank you Navin 🙂
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The yearning comes in strongly as each moment seems like eternity without him….short, yet makes a strong impression Bree ❤️
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Thanks Radhika 💜💜💜
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Really good and powerful line: “and ash would fill my life.” This poetry makes me sad. So very nice work!
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Thank you Ben. Although I don’t know want to make you sad, knowing these words have moved you is actually encouraging… The goal of every writer… To connect with the reader 🙂
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Yes, super encouraging exactly. You did your job effectively and successfully! Great work!
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That bonding… that yearning…
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You captured it perfectly Shantanu 🙂
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And you wrote it beautifully 😊
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Beautiful ❤❤❤
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Oh, so kind of you to say so! Thank you so much 💜
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Touching poem. I love the way you pour the emotions into words.
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Thank you Kritika 💜 Pouring emotions into words… Is there any other way for this who write 😜
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Ah…no. The way a poet is, it does its best to express it feelings. Rightly said. (Heart) Happy Writing 🙂
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