
By Charles Robert Lindholm and Bree Leto
Our first touchβ
with only your fingers
slowly brushing my hand
sent an extraordinary
jolt of electricity,
through my whole body
that I had never felt before
The twinkle
in your eye
sparked imaginings
that lit up my soul
The smile on your lips
whispered to my heart
making its beating race
as a blush showed
upon my face
An unintended touch
that somehow came to be
as your fingers brushed my hand
and awoke a part of me
I never knew
was waiting there
I shared a touch of the new
and a lingering stare with you
and hoped
for more
I always enjoy cooking up some words with Chuck. We hope you enjoyed this awakening piece, fitting for those starting to enjoy Spring.
Thanks so much for the privilege and pleasure of collaborating Bree!! Magical!!
xoxox πππΉπΉ
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So sensual and expressive. U 2 created a wonderful piece. More more please π
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Thanks so much, K!!! Collaborating is a true joy!!!
xoxox πππΉ
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Oh you are welcome Chuck. We always have fun and learn a lot along the way π
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Ha! Yes a real joy and pleasure and I do love learning new things, especially from You! And posting a piece always leaves me wanting – More! LOL
xoxox πππΉ
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Magical poem!
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Oh thank you Akshita! You are always so supportive and I never take it for granted.
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It’s a lovely piece, you did great work with these words..
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Thank you very much. Team work makes the dream work π
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Beautiful as always! And a brilliant collabπ€©
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Oh Nathi, so glad you liked it. Your comment has really made me smile so much.
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‘The smile on your lips
whispered to my heart
making its beating race
as a blush showed
upon my face’
The words, the sensual touch, the feelings attached. Oh…this is fabulous. Great collaboration!
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Chuck is a master at it, he always pulls more out of our words. Thank you very much Kritika (heart)
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My pleasure π (Heart)
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Amazing piece!!
Congratulations both!! π€π€
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Thanks Charmer π
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You’re so welcome ππ€
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Lovely collaboration!
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Thank you so much Susi π
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You are welcome! π
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Oh thank you for sharing our collaboration. I read your post on touch, it was beautifully written. I enjoyed all the ways you explored the nature of touch in our lives.
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