When you walked through the door
I fell onto your strong shoulder
crying out an avalanche of tears and pain.
Your chest caught every drop as I poured out my heart.
You held me so securely
whispering understanding reassurances into my hair.
It was exactly what I needed.
You were exactly what I needed.
wow this is embroidery of emotions weaved out of words…this line-avalanche of tears….such a perfect combo to describe emotion. Keep up the amazing work
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Thank you so much for these lovely words π
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The pleasure is all mine
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Beautiful. β€οΈ
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Thank you Arham π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Great romantic poem!
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I so love your writing, Dear Secrets!!! You write the best romantic and sexy pieces!! Mmmm!
xoxox ππππΉπβ¨β¨
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Thank you Chuck, that’s a very kind thing to say. I try, but I’m always looking to improve π
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Well, it’s true! Always room for improvement – Really looking forward to that!!! Mmmm!
xoxox ππππΉπβ¨β¨
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it is good to have someone so rock-steady dependable
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Absolutely John, absolutely!
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ahh, Sometimes its all we need. Lovely piece, Secret.
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Sometimes it is! π
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