Tension

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100 word story

I have pain in my lower back, so you offer to give a massage. Your strong hands quickly find the source of tension and your circular motions on my skin ease the stress. As I relax, I become distracted by your touch and the way your fingers sometimes curl around my sides. A primitive instinct takes over and my mind starts making suggestions for where your hands should drift next. I know there are other places on my body that are in desperate need of your fingerprints. Would you be willing to help me release a different kind of tension?

13 thoughts on “Tension

    1. Haha, thanks Lorraine! Hey, I just have a quick question… would you be willing to give me permission to link to your page for an award post Iโ€™m doing? Otherwise, I can simply write your name without the link if you’d prefer.

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      1. Thatโ€™s fine Secrets. No problem. If it is one of those where I have to nominate otehrs, I never know enough ppl. Lol. But anything is fine, and THANKYOU ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  1. Oh wow! This is superbly done: “A primative instincts take over and my mind starts making suggestions for where your hands should drift next. I know there are other places on my body that are in desperate need of your fingerprints.” Just feels like an excellent way to describe romantic feelings. Sensual and deep and suggestive rather than salacious or aggressive. Love the simmering subtly.

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