100 word story
I have pain in my lower back, so you offer to give a massage. Your strong hands quickly find the source of tension and your circular motions on my skin ease the stress. As I relax, I become distracted by your touch and the way your fingers sometimes curl around my sides. A primitive instinct takes over and my mind starts making suggestions for where your hands should drift next. I know there are other places on my body that are in desperate need of your fingerprints. Would you be willing to help me release a different kind of tension?
Secret Thoughts Within 
Wohho. U r killing it
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Oh thank you Nishabd!
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Whoa! Yay!
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Haha, thanks Lorraine! Hey, I just have a quick question… would you be willing to give me permission to link to your page for an award post I’m doing? Otherwise, I can simply write your name without the link if you’d prefer.
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That’s fine Secrets. No problem. If it is one of those where I have to nominate otehrs, I never know enough ppl. Lol. But anything is fine, and THANKYOU 😊
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No, I’m not nominating you (I don’t tend to do that), I’m just giving you a shout-out because you are fabulous 🙂
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Aww Secrets. Thankyou SO much. You have made my day. Dancing around now. He he
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lovely: I did not know where this was leading 🙂
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Oh wow! This is superbly done: “A primative instincts take over and my mind starts making suggestions for where your hands should drift next. I know there are other places on my body that are in desperate need of your fingerprints.” Just feels like an excellent way to describe romantic feelings. Sensual and deep and suggestive rather than salacious or aggressive. Love the simmering subtly.
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Thank you Ben, I love the lines you pulled out and how you summarised this piece!
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It’s really great. I was instantly jealous I hadn’t written them.
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Haha, I know the feeling!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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