More (Haiku) Posted bySecret BreeSeptember 11, 2020September 11, 2020Posted inHaikuTags:Haiku One more night with you Is all I’ve ever wanted Since you walked away Share this:TwitterFacebookPinterestLike this:Like Loading... Related
So I cross my heart and I hope to die That I’ll only stay with you one more night LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Perfect line Harsh 👏😆 And when the stars no longer shine We’ll close the curtains and shut out the light. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Good haiku. But will it end there? Or will it always be more after that? I like how this leaves the reader wondering about so much, and the details of the relationship. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Thanks Ben, yes it is very open to interpretation isn’t it. I like how you ask questions leaving it open for a happy ending 😊💜 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
It is. It’s good work. You keep writing very exciting pieces. I’ll be looking forward to what you’ll do next. LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes well, I already know what’s coming up next 🔥😅🙈 It will be closed comments for sure 😆 LikeLiked by 3 people
Secret Thoughts Within
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Nice
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Thanks Aashi 💜
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The heart wants what it wants, especially when it can’t have that
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So true, so very true Shweta 💜
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So I cross my heart and I hope to die
That I’ll only stay with you one more night
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Perfect line Harsh 👏😆
And when the stars no longer shine
We’ll close the curtains and shut out the light.
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Perfect finish! 😁😆
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Good haiku. But will it end there? Or will it always be more after that? I like how this leaves the reader wondering about so much, and the details of the relationship.
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Thanks Ben, yes it is very open to interpretation isn’t it. I like how you ask questions leaving it open for a happy ending 😊💜
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It is. It’s good work. You keep writing very exciting pieces. I’ll be looking forward to what you’ll do next.
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Yes well, I already know what’s coming up next 🔥😅🙈 It will be closed comments for sure 😆
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Haha. Well, I already like it then! It’s a great piece, I’m sure.
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Haha 🤣🤣🤣You crack me up Ben.
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I’m glad, then. Laughter, at times, is the best thing.
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This is good one ST, subtle yet conveys a lot.
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Haha thank you Uzzawal 💜
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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The heart eases when the words find a way to express. Lovely write 🙂
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Absolutely, what wonderful insight Kritika 💜
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🙂 (Heart)
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