Should we share our secrets?
Do we dare be so brave?
I’m not sure this is wise,
Should we discuss what we really crave?
If you tell me that you want me,
Then I’ll tell you I want you back.
If you whisper that you think of me,
I’ll confess you’re my soundtrack.
If you share that you dream of me at night,
I’ll admit you’re my secret flame.
If you disclose that you really want my heart,
Then I’ll quietly tell you, I feel the same.
Secret Thoughts Within 
Wow, this is really well written. The audio took this piece to an even higher level!
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Oh thank you Shruti, this is such an encouragement. 💜💜💜
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👌👌 Beautifully written! The audio added more depth!!😃
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Thank you brave Knight ⚔️ You felt the audio added? Good to know. I appreciate your feedback 👍
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This is beautifully written ST, I like the words and the flow on this one. And well recited too, the audio gave the extra boost as Shruti mentioned. Well done, keep it up 🙌
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts Uzzawal! They are always appreciated 😊
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Yes, yes, yes. It did work out well, ST. Excellent job. The writing and your Voice were beautiful ❤️😊 try out some more🤗
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🤭 Thanks Jojo 😊 Glad the audio seems to be working for everyone.
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You have a lovely voice. So yeah 😊
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Haha, I’ll tell you a secret Jojo… It’s my special ‘reading poetry’ voice 😆
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Hahaha nice, me likey like 😳😂 keep the good work going, ST🤗
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Wow. U completed ma wish for recital. Thanks mate
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🤣 You’re welcome mate
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Hahaha.
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Nice. Appreciate the overall concept of this one. The “bravery” it takes to share secrets with another: that’s well said. And well spoken, of course. It’s nice to see how a poet/poetess reads their work. Adds another layer to the poem. You read it so well.
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Thank you Ben. I wasn’t sure if hearing how I read it would impact too much on how the reader interprets it 🤷🏼♀️ It certainly won’t be a regular occurrence 😆😅
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Well, yeah you read it very effectively. Cause it sounded like people whispering secrets. You, not only read it, but acted it out effectively. Good job!
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The poem is amazing but having the audio makes it more awesome! Would love to see more of this. 💞
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Thanks Herl, that is such a lovely thing to say! 💜😊
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Awesome both the poem and the audio!
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Thanks so much Aashi 💜
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this is the most beautiful thing that i’ve read in a very long time. the sincerity that i felt in your voice, is just so rare these days. i loved this. 🙂
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Wow Srijan, this has completely taken me by surprise. To receive such a comment by a talented writer! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 🙂
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Aye! Loved this!! I also loved the audio.
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Thank you Harsh, that is good to hear 🙂
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Beautiful Secrets 👊🏻💜
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Thank you Nick 😊💜👊🏻 I appreciate you saying so.
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Absolutely love this!!
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Thanks so much Rishika 😊💜
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Oh wow, each sentence here is filled with depth. A completely delightful read. The audio added to its beauty! Great job. ✨✨
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Wow!!! This was Awesome, My Dear!! So moving and romantic!!! It was really great!! And then you went and made it Perfect by doing an audio with it!! Bellissimo, simply, Bellisimo!!
xoxo
😘💖💕😁🌹
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Thank you so much Chuck. You have made my day with your encouraging words 🙂
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Well then I say that’s a fair exchange because listening to you narrate your poem did the same for me!! It was wonderful to be able to close my eyes and listen to your voice and visualize it!! Bellissimo!!
😁😘💕💖🌹
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😊💜
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
DON’T MISS THE AUDIO
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Wow…loved the flow of this poetry…great work…
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Oh thank you for sharing your encouraging thoughts 😊
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