Take my hand dear Knight
And I’ll show you a new world
Where no dragons live
Is this even a legitimate Haiku? ๐คท๐ผโโ๏ธ
Some thoughts need to come out
Take my hand dear Knight
And I’ll show you a new world
Where no dragons live
Is this even a legitimate Haiku? ๐คท๐ผโโ๏ธ
It is in my book
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Thanks John. Well if it’s in your book, it must be. Fabulous.
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Have a wonderful day ahead Secrets, full of joy and inspiration.
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Oh thank you Nick ๐ I hope you have a wonderful sleep, full of joyful and inspirational dreams.
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You are very kind
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And you are also… Very kind.
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I’ll sleep and dream and write about it. I look forward to your writing always.
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Fabulous, I look forward to reading about some bizarre place or event ๐
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Absolutely โบ๏ธ
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P.S ๐
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This does sound good! ๐
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Thanks Uzzawal ๐
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Aren’t Knights hardwired to fight dragons? What would they do if there are no dragons?
Just asking.๐คฃ๐คฃ
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๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ Perhaps some could be shipped in ๐คท๐ผโโ๏ธ๐๐๐
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Then it destroys the purpose of showing the Knight a world without dragons. ๐๐๐๐คฃ
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Damn. What the hell was I even thinking when I wrote this ๐ I’ll need to write one that leaves the Knight where he is so he can enjoy his dragon slaying in peace.
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Now that sounds better. ๐๐
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Knight (Haiku)
Hey there Mr Knight
Enjoy fighting with dragons
Iโll be over here
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Brilliant! ๐๐
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lovely – I like fairytale and peace ๐ธ
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It does sound rather nice.
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terrific; looks like a haiku to me
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I just wasn’t sure if it read more like a sentence and less like a haiku. Thanks John.
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it’s a bit tricky, I know, but a tightly constructed sentence with an image can be a haiku; but this is a liberal interpretation; purists might disagree ๐
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Awesome it is I just can’t write these
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Thanks lovely! I must admit I now find them slightly addictive.
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That’s great, will u please tech me this concept??
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Do you know the structure of a haiku? If not, it’s a three lines poem. 5 syllable, 7 syllables and then 5 again. The best haikus can be said in one breath and should stir up an emotion in the reader. A lot of them focus on nature or emotions. I am very much starting out so I would honestly look them up online if I were you ๐ Warning, they are addictive, I find myself writing them all the time.
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Thanks a lot dear, u r too sweet, thanks once again have a grt day ahead!!!!! Thank you sooooooo much!! ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
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Very nicely done!
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Beautiful ๐
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Thank you Beautiful heart ๐
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