
Living in the interlude
I struggled to find peace
distracted by what had been
and desperate for what was to come
I waited for life to begin again –
delayed in the interlude
Time stood still
An uninvited pause between movements
with nothing remarkable
to show for myself
Ticks of the metronome
I felt dull
restrained
and alone
During this vacant stretch
before my next movement
I wondered if I still had value
despite making no progress
I waited for purpose –
silenced in the interlude
Then
I heard my heart beating
that gentle drumming of rhythm
enough to keep time to
My breath
leaning on the keys of my soul
created waves of deep resonance
My fingers
strummed on the frets
as my mind wrote in minor
My voice
humming soulful notes of hopeful dreams
filled the space in between
Holding onto patience
I waited to play the cadence
In those motionless moments of life,
I observed my hidden potential
I opened up my eyes to see things
my current reality didn’t
I waited and finally saw the possibilities –
while remaining in the interlude
In the everyday monotony
in the sighs between events
in the strength I no longer had left
my life still created music
It was the beautiful sound
of my interlude
Cadence: A musical term meaning the ending or resolution
Originally published 16 October 2020
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😊 Thanks John.
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Such a beautiful and soulful piece. I love the journey you have created for your readers. 💗 My favorite line is:
“I waited for purpose–
silenced in the interlude.”
So much meaning in every stanza! Excellent work!
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Thank you Katy 💜 It was a significant piece for me to write personally, but I feel we all have those moments in life where we feel stuck and don’t know our place. Thanks for your encouragement and connection 💜💜💜
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Wow!
The repetition of the word “interlude” added more power to your poem.
“I waited and finally saw the possibilities” – I loved this!!❤️
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Phew, so glad to hear that 😊 I love hearing which part you connected with 💜
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Wow!
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Thanks Akshita 😊
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Hope you find in the rhythm of the beating heart.
Beautiful articulation.
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Thank you Beautiful Kritika (Heart)
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My pleasure always ST 🙂 (Heart)
Have a wonderful day.
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Beautiful❤️
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Thanks Diana 💜
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Powerful poem ST. Finding the rhythm of life in the interlude, sounds like something we all should get used to. The flow of words here was amazing, Nice one 🙌
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Thank you Uzzawal 😊 I’m glad to hear you could relate to this space (I think we all can) and of course your encouragement is always appreciated 🙌
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Wow! I so loved this, My Dear!! Absolutely awesome!! Loved the use of the musical to life and love! Brilliant, simply brilliant!!
xoxo
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Thank you Chuck 😊
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Very clever and brilliant!! Loved it, loved it!!
xoxo
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Thanks again for such caring and thoughtful gifts, SA!! Will cherish them, always!!!
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😊💜 You are welcome Chuck.
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Oh, forgot!! Stunning Graphic! So imaginative!! 😁😁✨✨
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Haha, thanks for that. When I use images, it’s always great when you find ‘that perfect one’ 😀 🎼
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Mission Accomplished on this one!!! A++++
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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I love the opening line and how you slowly took my breath…till the end..
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Thank you Mich! Sincerely, thank you for this reflection.
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Really felt this! Great use of musical ideas: like how you interwove it.
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That’s lovely to hear Ben 🙂
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I love the music references, I could relate so much to the whole of it like seeing my own reflection in water. I looove music.
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Oh that is so lovely to hear Kizito!
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Absolutely beautiful, Bree 💜
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Thank you Navin. I remember how much of myself I put into writing this one.
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A very beautiful poem. I guess there’s music in the everyday things too, between events that are life changing. I enjoyed this poem very much.
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Extremely beautiful, Bree! 💗
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