Patiently waiting
for the right time to unleash
and dance with the breeze
This Haiku is four of five that were created for a submission with pureHaiku called Unfurling.
Originally published 19 July 2021
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Oh I like this take on the image. 💙
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So glad to hear that Elle 😊😁
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Bree dancing with the breeze….unleashing secrets….I’m waiting impatiently….it’s my way of saying, I love your haiku ✨💖
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Haha, well that is a relief to hear Navin 😃
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Yeah…now you can stop sweating 😉😂
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rock a little
put some fire
on ya girdle
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Lovely haiku!
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Oh thank you Aashi ☺️
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Perfect! Go with the flow, or the breeze!
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That’s it my friend 👌
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Nice. I love it. Such good work! 🙂
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Great one, Bree!
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Thanks Susi 😊
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Dance with the breeze. Oh how warming it would be. Love your haiku.
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Now this comment is like a breath of fresh air itself. Thank you Kritika 💜
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Super 😀
My pleasure (heart)
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Re-read this. I LOVE IT! This so cool. Has that extra meaning that stays with you, even after its gone, like a breezing blowing free. Nice, nice, nice!
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Oh thanks Ben! I’m glad to hear it. I did enjoy writing this series.
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AWESOME!!!
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Aren’t we all? It’s a beautiful concept and this beautiful haiku captures that idea of freedom so well.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Glad to heat you liked this Haiku
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