
Heaviness sits in my hands and heart
weighing me down
from all the things we could be
and all the things we’re not
I long for more of you
for more of us
Oh, I want to touch you
in ways I never have before
I tell my hands to move
Move, god damn it, move
but they rebel
sitting still in my lap
Oh, how I want to touch you!
You’re so close
a breath of air away
but a breath of air is insurmountable
when fear is weighing you down
A massive thank you to Benjamin Grossman for lending his voice to this poem. I wanted a male vocal for this piece and wow… just wow. He took the protagonist’s words and elevated them beyond simple lines on a page. It’s not easy recording for someone else, so thank you, Ben.
Den’s audio narration certainly made your words climb off the page Bree
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Oh that’s great to hear Ivor 🙂 He did a great job with this.
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Yes indeed Bree
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Did I just experience a play (on stage show)? Ingenious you two! 👏👍💕
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Insightful Cassa! Yes, it is very much like a play. Thank you for reading/listening.
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Wow! This was so awesome! I love the way your words touch me, Bree!!!
😊😁✨💕🌹
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Naww, I’m so glad to hear that 😁
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😊💕🌹
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That’s beautiful 👌🏻
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Oh, thanks for this feedback. So glad to hear it 🙂
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🙏🙏
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The poetry is 💖. Ben did bring the feelings out. 😉
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He did a remarkable job right 👏👏👏 I’m glad you liked my poetry 💜
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Indeed!
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Thanks for sharing your words with me. This was fun. Have a great rest of your week!
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You smashed it. Thank YOU for being brave enough to give it a go 👍
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Welcome. Thanks again, too.
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Wonderfully done❤
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Thanks Sirishty, so glad you think so ❤️
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