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Tiny fragments of thoughts
snatches of a cosmic melody –
this little voice of mine
hums a tune and wonders
will anyone sing along?
If my whispering song
was suddenly sung very loud
would anyone turn their head?
Would anyone hear the sound?
Does my single life matter
if this voice of mine is a whisper
amongst eight billion others?
I am
so small
Perhaps, the value of a life
and the significance of our hours
combine in a chorus
and the whispers become a roar
Without my small voice
the melody left behind
wouldn’t be so strong
So, I’ll swallow my insignificance
and keep on singing
At least my whisper is a song
In two (maybe three) generations it’s unlikely anyone will remember anything about me beyond my name. Sometimes my insignificance overwhelms me. But, perhaps my significance is found in snatching moments and trying to make sense of them. My “poetic whispers” and reflections are all I’ve got, and maybe they’re enough. Thank you for reading them. 💜
Music credit: In The Moment by Steve Oxen
Such an amazing piece…in your beautiful voice, Bree…”At least my whisper is a song” 🔥💟
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Thank you Navin 🙂 This is a very kind of you to write and share with me.
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You’re very welcome, dear Bree 💟
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Wow! love this Bree! 💜
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Thank you VB 💜
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I so love this, Bree!!! I think you just found the title for your next book – Poetic Whispers!!! I believe that our words whisper and yours especially reach out to readers hearts and souls – so yes – your words will always whisper with those who are blessed enough to read them!!! I’ve been missing your posts – I know – life intrudes, Ha! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!! 😊😁💕🌹🌹
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Haha, thanks Chuck. I’m glad to hear you enjoyed this. ‘Words will always whisper with those who read them’, that’s beautiful 🙂
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See, Just like I’ve told you – your words whisper to my heart with sweet inspirations! How are you???
😊💕🌹
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Oh it’s beautiful.
Especially Loved the last 2 lines.⭐
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😊 Thank for for telling me so 💜
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At least your whisper is a song. Keep singing. Very beautiful poem that’s humble in many respects.
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Oh thank you.
I seem to have have missed your comment, but it also seems I needed to read it today. 🙂
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Powerful, Bree. 💜
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Thank you Jeff 😊
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Deep writing. All these are great. Your poetry is top-notch. Keep writing always!
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Thanks Ben… I’ll try 😅
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