
We should sit silently for a while
interlace our fingers
hold hands
I could trace over your wrist
with a delicate touch
acquaint myself with each callous on your palm
You could brush a thumb over my rings
place thoughtful kisses on my hands
memorise the curves of my fingerprints
We should spend time together
inside the sweet intimacy
of holding hands
There is something so sensual and intimate about touch another’s hands don’t you think?
Love the reading form!
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Oh thank Cassa, that’s so lovely (and really encouraging) to hear 😊
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👍🤗
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much 💜😊💜
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💜
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Beautifully written…and spoken…it gave me this feeling of holding hands….right away…
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Seriously Navin, this is a wonderful comment to read. I am glad you connected to it as you did 🙂
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I sure did…and whenever I read it, I get connected…so thank you, Bree 💫
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What a lovely poem and reading. Yes, there is much emotion and connection transmitted through hands, which makes it so very sensual. Beautiful, Bree. 💙
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Jeff, I love reading your thoughts on this. I (obviously) agree 🙂
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I’m so glad this is so, Bree. I had an equally lovely time reading your poem. Have a wonderful day/evening, my friend. 😊
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This is so romantic. I think people in love would enjoy this poem 🙂 And yes, totally agree, holding hands is something 🙂
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Ah yes, it is absolutely a poem for lovers 🙂
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🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and Enjoy the verses and the Audio from Bree!!
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😊💜
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😊💕🌹
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I absolutely love this! Its great! Well done! ❤
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Thank you Carol, so kind of you 💜
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