I’m missing my yang
Without you I’m in a tailspin
Without you I’m spiralling
d
o
w
n
w
r
d
s
Half of my soul has departed
If yang is heaven light heat
why do I feel as though
I’ve crossed-over
into the after-life
since you left?
To read the companion poem to this one, see Benjamin Grossman’s “Yin”. https://benjamin-grossman.com/2021/07/03/yin/
Secret Thoughts Within 
Loving your layout. Very beautiful work. Really mesmerizing. Thanks for joining in on this. I never written companion pieces to a new poem, just more to historical ones. Again: brilliant work and many thanks!
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No, thank you for letting me join you Ben! I like the way your ‘pieces’ fall.
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Thanks a lot. But you really re-taught me how to achieve a successful layout, so it’s more praise to you. Thanks for everything. Love what you’ve achieved in this!
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I won’t get into a debate about who deserves what praise… we both know I will win 😏 I will instead, simply say “teamwork makes the dream work” 😁
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Yeah, haha “teamwork”: exactly this. You might win true (but only because I would let you). Stay safe! 🙂
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oh, you two are brilliant. I just read Ben’s Yin, then reading this, gave me another wow feeling…
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Oh thank you Mich, I’m so, so happy to hear this 💜💜💜💜💜
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it gives me “kilig”feeling ..its a Filipino word for charmed or feeling giddy
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Wow! 😊
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Lovely companion p i e c e s. 💙
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Oooo, I like what you did there 😏💜 Thanks Elle.
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😊 you’re welcome. 💙
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What a brilliant piece, Secrets….I loved the “downwards” effect….the lines are quite deep…I read Ben’s Yin as well….wow when it comes to collab or writing such companion poetry, you both have a beautiful flow…..Keep expressing, Bree 💫💙
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Wow Navin… Thank you for such wonderful feedback on both our pieces 💜😊
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You’re welcome, dear Bree….what can I say….I liked the concept of companion piece (something new to me) & the poem(s) 💙✨
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Fantastic, stunning arrangement and one can feel the yang. Going to comment on the yin. 😀
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Thanks for your lovely thoughts Kritika 💜 I hope you enjoyed Ben’s Yin as much as I did.
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Yes very much. Thank you both for sharing such unique and artistic poetry styles.
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Loved Yin and Yang. I love what you’ve done with downwards, Bree. Beautifully written ❤️
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Thank you so much Shweta. I’m really glad to hear you liked the layout, it can be tricky getting the layout you want on WP.
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Oh yes. Hats off to you for pulling it off.. The block editor can be so frustrating at times!
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Beautifully done. Both pieces are amazing , truly enjoyed.❤️
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😊 I’m really glad to hear this Grace 💜
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💕❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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This is so so beautiful. I love the ending to this piece, it’s so powerful in emotion. Both yours and Ben’s together makes for an exquisite masterpiece. Well done 🖤🖤
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Thank you ever so much Ace for your beautiful support 💜
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Brilliant! I love this idea! 👍🖤
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Thanks Charmer, it’s all thanks to Ben… It was his suggestion 🙂
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You both compliment each other so well 👍🖤
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❤️❤️❤️
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A great collaboration! The afterlife is another level of heaven, I suppose? The lovely thing is yin and yang can never really be separated ❤
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Yes, they always connected in perfect balance. They hold a part of each other inside themselves (if you romanticise it). Thank you for taking the time to read and comment 🙂
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Spiralling downwards….what an innovative and ingenious piece of work both of you have come up together Bree ❣️
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Thank you Radhika 💜 lovely to read your words 😊
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I loved what you did with downwards. Beautiful lines!
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Thank you Akshita 😊😊😊
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This is an interesting piece by you two. Very nice!
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Interesting pieces I must say 🙂
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Thank you Vignesh 🙂
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Lovely and beautifully formatted!😍🤗😊🌻
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Thanks Diana 😊💜
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