Take me to places I’ve never been
Show me sights that are evergreen.
Hold my hand, show me the way
Please just help me run away.
Open my eyes to exciting things
I’ll leave my life, cut all the strings.
Our path will take a brand-new shape
Please Baby, just help me escape.
Thanks must go to one of my WP friends for prompting me; this audio is a last minute addition.
Secret Thoughts Within 
This is such a sweet poem! Really loved it ♥
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Thanks so much Sonali, I appreciate your thoughts… I’ll be honest and say I wasn’t entirely sure about this one 😅 But sometimes you just have to keep pushing yourself and put it out there 💜
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Exactly! I mean, this poem is so sweet! Have a blessed day dear ♥♥
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come enjoy this escape!
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We all crave an escape every now and then 😁
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Now and then?? Ha! What? Aren’t they a part of your daily schedule?? You are missing out! LOL 😍😁😊
😊💕💕🌹
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Amazing verbal poetry. Your beautiful voice made for the verbal reading.
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Oh, you are so kind! Thank you John, this is a lovely comment to read 🙂
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I do the YouTube videos. But my voice, not so pretty. A good voice give life to our words. You are welcome.
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Beautiful poem, Bree. Loved the audio too! ❤️❤️🙏🌹
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Glad to hear you liked this short piece Diana. I’m glad too that I added the audio then!
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Marvelous narration! Such a masterpiece!
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Haha, I think masterpiece might be pushing it a bit 😆 But you words are very encouraging Tanishq 🙂
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Such a sweet poem, Bree. You’ve got a great voice. I loved the narration!
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Short and sweet can be the key 😉 That’s very kind of you to say about my voice, it’s the only one I have, so I’m glad you like it 😆💜
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😂😂😂
You’re very welcome 🙂
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Lovely, as always!
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Thank you my friend 🙂
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Lovely poem
Directly went to heart 🤩🌼🌼
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Oh Aparna, you are just too lovely. So encouraging! Gamsahabnida! 😉
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Anieyo my dear friend 😅💐🌼
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so beautiful ❤❤❤
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💜💜💜 Thank you Vani 😊😊😊
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none to day
this is the way
shapes of things
from in your soul
punched the hole
all ovah the palace
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💜
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🙂
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Breeeeeeeeee, your voice takes my heart every time I hear it.
I liked your poem as well!
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Oh Rashmi, you really do have such a beautiful soul. Thank you 💜
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Sweet poem. 💖
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Thanks Elle 😁💜
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Such a lovely poem, it’s deeply beautiful. And your voice is amazing, truly brings the words to life. I absolutely love this piece, well done 🤗🖤
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Oh thank you Ace, that’s lovely to hear 💜
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Beautiful poem, Secrets….I love this spoken word of yours….it’s full of passion…
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As always, thank you for your kind words Navin. I know you understand the process behind spoken word… For me, if I don’t do it with passion or emotion, I think… What’s the point? 🙂
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Such a beautiful verse and your voice is mesmerizing. You should have a YouTube channel
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Oh I don’t think I have the energy to add that into the mix, but thank you kindly for saying so
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😊😊you are welcome
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Such wonderful lines: “I’ll leave my life, cut all the strings. / Our path will take a brand-new shape”. Really good reading as always!
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Oh thanks so much Ben. Glad to hear it 😅
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You’re welcome! It worked it out well this reading and the poem has a gravity to it not many can obtain through words alone. Keep it up! 🙂
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Love the words. They feel magical. Beautiful flow and emotions fully poured.
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Emotions fully poured… I love that 💜
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(heart) Cheers!
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I could close my eyes and just listen to you
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Oh that is a lovely thing to say Mich!
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