Call out to me my Love,
Help me remember who I am.
I have lost my way and it is too dark for me to see.
Reach past my walls and comfort me,
For all the world feels cold.
Before I waste away, please my Love,
Remind me of the life still inside my veins.
My strength has disappeared and I have forgotten who I was.
I know you can not fix me, but you can fill my heart with love.
Secret Thoughts Within 
❤️❤️❤️
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🙂💜🙂
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Hey Nishabd, thanks for sharing what your poetic reply would be to this piece 🙂 Some lovely words here 👏
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Such a heartbreaking poem
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Thank you Shweta, yes the emotions are strong in this one 💜
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Exactly: “I know you can not fix me, but you can fill my heart with love.” And maybe having that love is enough to not worry about needing to be fixed. I appreciate the sentiment of this piece.
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Thank you Ben for sharing what you drew out of this piece. What a lovely thought, being loved enough to not have to worry about being ‘fixed’.
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You brought the thought to light. Thanks for sharing this!
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‘You can fill my heart…’
The last line is touching. Wow. Lovely read.
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Thank you Kritika 😊💜
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Pleasure 🙂 🙂
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Oh yes. I feel this
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Thank you Lorraine 💜💜💜
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This is a stunning poem! So heartfelt. Often, only the right person can pull us out of the mirage we create for ourselves. I love the last sentence. Great job!
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Thank you for saying Rishika 😊💜
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Woww!
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so moving!
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I remember the emotions I felt when writing this one… Glad to hear they have stood the test of 6 months and still carry the same.
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