I’ve finally got you alone
I’ve been waiting all day for this moment
and I promise to make the most of it
I won’t overlook a single part of you
My pulse quickens in anticipate of what I’m about to do to you
My fingers are itching to start
my lips are twitching to taste you
Oh God, I need you so badly tonight
I slowly drink you in
devouring you with my hungry eyes
I’ve never seen a sight so alluring
I can’t look away, you hold me captive
Damn your sinful sensuality!
You really are my naughty little secret
What makes it all the more enticing
is knowing that being with you like this is forbidden
I love that you make me feel this way
it’s why I keep coming back for more
I can’t hold out any longer, I must have you now
I pull you to me, bringing you in with a smile
Nothing can come close to this
Strawberries, bananas and chocolate
waffles winking at me from the plate
Come on Baby, I won’t let one bite go to waste
Originally published 3 Sept 2020
Ha ha ha ha brilliant!
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Haha, thank you Lorraine! 😉😆
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You had me there for a moment or two, until I got to the last bit. And now I’m hungry. Where’s my breakfast? 😀
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Muhahahaha (evil laughter), my work here is done then 😆
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Oh nooooooooo please STAY. Wanting MORE 😀
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Fabulous, wanting more is a good thing in this instance 😉 Mmmm waffles 😋
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Mmm yesI have some waffles in the kitchen cupboard 😀
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Woow!!!
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Haha 😉
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Enticing, sensual and brilliantly penned ✨💜
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Thank you Nathi 🧇 I had fun shaping this one 😁
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You’re welcome and have a great day, Secret 🙂
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This is wonderful ST, strong imagery. That was a nice twist at the end! Chocolate does make me feel like that at times! Well written! 🙌
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Haha, thanks Uzzawal! It was a fun one to write, but now I want Waffles! 😆
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Playing well with the genre
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Thanks Nishabd 😊
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Very clever! And playful. Love the end. And this too: “What makes it all the more enticing / Is knowing that being with you like this is forbidden.” Great, great, great work.
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Thanks Ben! I really tried to to get the most out of every line 😁😉
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You achieved it. It’s was a fantastic set up all way through.
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“Hungry eyes” was good, too!
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Oh thanks! It was fun to drop little hints that the reader would realise only at the end 😊
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Hahaha. This is soo good and clever. And now I want a waffle.
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You and me both Hun, you and me both 😉😋😆
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I am so in love with this desirable desert! 😉🤤
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As am I 😉😋
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Yes, true, but it felt like a bait and switch!! We can’t stop imaginings on a dime ya know!! LOL!
xoxo
😘💕🌹
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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That was a naughty twist at the end! LOL!
xoxo
😘💕🌹✨
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Haha, of the tastiest kind! 💜
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Yeah … I’m a chocoholic Bree … 🤗😍
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Me too Ivor, me too 😍
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Lol Bree 😀 😀 That was wonderfully done 🙂 Amazing the twist!
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Haha thanks Vignesh! This is one of my favs. I also want waffles every time I read it 😆😆😆
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Ha ha 😀 You are welcome!
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Haha, brilliantly written…that twist in the end…now, imagine for a few seconds…if that plate were a human boød 😂…Bree, you’re very creative…captivating lines 👏✨🔥💫
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Haha, thanks Navin… always fun to add a twist if possible. And oh my, yes indeed… how… saucy haha.
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You’re welcome, Bree…I typed “body”…it changed into something weird 😂😂
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Haha, never dear Navin, I can read ‘weird’ 😂
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😂💟
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Ahahaha. Totally get this. Sublime. 😆🍌🧇
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Haha, glad to hear it Jeff 😆😆😆
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