By Vintage Black and Bree Leto
I am so tired
so very, very tired
of not feeling comfortable within myself
I am so weary
so very, very weary
of putting my heart back on the shelf
Tired
tired tired
Weary
weary weary
Comfortable with nothing
and weary with so little
my shelf life (patience) expired
and my honest thoughts
are cracked and
b r i t t l e
Feelings in disguise,
yet naked to my eyes
tired of dried tears
words stumbling
in my mouth
Iβm comfortable
with nothing
I keep wearing
this sad face,
walking through my life
feeling barely
awake
I am so tired
so very, very tired
of not feeling comfortable within myself
I am so weary
so very, very weary
of putting my heart back on the shelf
Tired
tired tired
Weary
weary weary
I open my eyes
stifle a yawn
allow my heart to take some chances
Some friendly hugs
Some cheeky words
Some flirty engaging glances
Still
so tired,
and so weary
I am
Yet I know,
with a smile
a verse
a stream of thought,
a nice coffee
under the sun
Iβll awaken from dreams
and all I have lost
and slowly
but surely discover
my heart’s still beating β
s o s t r o n g
Brilliant work both π€π€
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Thanks Charmer. I always enjoy collaborating with VB. She has such a dynamic writing flare, which delights my creative heart to no end.
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You both complement each other so well ππ€
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This would work well with the previous poem you wrote. Brittle yet at the end strong, nice collaborative work. π
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Oh true, thanks for pointing that out Elle! It’s always nice to leave the reader with a reminder that you can be both those things at the same time.
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Yes, you can. Youβre most welcome. ππ
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as per bb king thrill is gone but love still came to town
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Lovely work! Love the title! π
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Thanks Cassa π It’s always great when you find a grabbing title π
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I like this very much, like the stages it documents, love the phrasing, the blend of vernacular and poetic, and that haunting refrain: ‘putting my heart back on the shelf’ —
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Thank you so much John! It’s always great when a collaboration takes on a life of it’s own and unfolds effortlessly as was the case with this piece π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Yay!!! so much fun, those tired and weary muses did nicely inspire us!!!
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Haha, they really did!
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This is very interesting, especially the structure π It feels more like a song than a poem you know π I like how you ended it on a positive note. Well written you both π
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Thanks Vignesh. It’s always great writing with someone else you trust, because the ideas take on a wonderful mind of their own π
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Ah. This is a lovely collaboration, my friends. The reality of feelings and emotions comes through vibrantly, with an ending that makes entry into the readers heart, smilingβ¦π
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Wonderful work ππ
The Collab did great π
And was able to express feelings amazingly π
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Thank you sweet heart ππ
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My pleasure dear π€π»
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Excellent. Sadness with a nice cup of hope!
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Oh thanks Ben, yes you summed it up perfectly π Always good to serve up some hope β
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You’re welcome! It’s good and your work shines!
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Oh, what a brilliant collab Bree..i love how this flows seamlessly beautiful
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Thank you Mich, VB is a beautiful artist and this was a joy to create together.
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