We’ve been together for so long
I hope you understand
I think it might be time
For me to find a new man.
I want some fresh romance
Someone who will bring me flowers
A man who’s company
I’ll enjoy for endless hours.
I need a man with wit
One who will make me laugh
Or leave me alone to enjoy
A solitary bath.
Give me a man with charisma
And that special kind of charm
Let’s not forget to mention
Toned muscles in his arms.
After I cook us dinner
He’ll do the dishes every night
And be quick to say he’s sorry
When we get into a fight.
He’ll know just what to say
When I’m feeling blue
And exactly how to tease
When I’m in a quirky mood.
I need a man who’ll make
Me scream out his name
Rekindling my passion
Turning embers into flame.
The new man that I wanted,
Turns out he was you
So tell me now my Lover,
What do you think we should do?
Secrets this is lovely. I adore the ending. Just beautiful.
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Oh thank you Lorraine 💜
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This is beautiful! Loved the twist in last stanza!
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Haha, I do love a twist 😁 Thanks Her.
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Amazing! I loved reading it, listening it, re-reading it, Secret. Don’t we all that man! 😁🤗🙏💙
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Oh thank you so much Bulbul, I’m so glad you liked it 😊💜
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Of course, thanks for sharing!
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OMG Secrets!! This is such a Masterpiece!!! This is overflowing with – Everything! Mmmm! Your words painted the perfect picture of wanting and desiring More.
Especially love your lines –
“I need a man who’ll make
Me scream out his name
Rekindling my passion
Turning embers into flame”
So exquisitely sensuous and full of delight – a signature work from a – Poetess Extraordinaire!!! And you topping it off with an audio recording of you reciting it takes this off the chart!!!
After listening to your last line I felt a silent wish and envisioned a massive balloon drop with confetti!!! Such an expert crafting of “Amazing” with the power of your magical words!! Let not another whisper ever pass your lips or enter your head to contradict these words – You are a Poetess Extraordinaire!!!! And if they start to form or come your way just softly say, Shhhh! And make them go away!
Bellissimo, Sweet Secrets, Bellissimo!
xoxox
Chuck
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Do you believe me now??
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Thank you Chuck 🤣🤣🤣 I knew you would like the addition of audio 😆 Thanks for being so encouraging… That internal doubt/criticism, well it’s something I think I will always have, but hopefully I can continue to use it to push me to learn more and grow 🤷🏼♀️
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Yes, You know I loved it!! Well, please try and Shhh it away! That voice is from your inner perfectionist and she is a Liar!
xoxox
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
DO NOT MISS READING THIS By Secrets!!!!
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Wasn’t expecting this ending, but it worked nicely. This one is charming, and enjoyable. You read with such passion and creativity. Keep writing your wonderful poetry.
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Thank you Ben for that encouragement. I do enjoy a twist if I can make it work 😁
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Welcome. You sure made this one work! 🙂
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Loved it. Love love love love love it. The charismatic voice did its job. I would say. I am in love with this one.
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Oh thank you so much! What an encouragement you are to me 💜
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I heard it again. The last two lines have an attraction.
Welcome always 🙂 (Heart)
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Come Enjoy This From Secret Thoughts Within
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hahaha I think I also need a man with muscles in his arms. just kidding. this is such a great piece. oh man, what to do.
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Haha, I think you might 😉
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HAHAHAHA is this a sign. just kidding
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Loved this piece!😏😁
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Oh that makes me smile Sirishty 😊 Thanks for telling me 💜
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You’re welcome🤗🤗🤍
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