It’s amazing what questions your honesty brings,
Just let me ask you the following things.
Can you help me solve the mystery?
Just how are you now in misery?
Was there one particular moment
Or one specific trying component?
Was it a slow build up over time?
Was my not noticing part of the crime?
Did you look one day and your heart had changed?
Did you kiss my lips and feel estranged?
Is there something I should have tried?
How long did you keep that secret inside?
Why is this sudden confession something I didn’t see?
Oh when did you fall out of love with me?
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Thank you Navaparna, I will post my reply when I can. So kind of you to think of me π
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Yea sure, take your time β¨
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A very poignant and beautiful write π
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Thank you Katy π
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Emotional piece!!
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Thanks Radhika π
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OMG Secrets, Your words brought a sting to my heart! Touching old memories like an electric prod and forcing me to relive/remember long forgotten pain and scars!! Part of who I am, but try and keep those rogue memories locked deep in my heart!! I think you have left me some beautiful seeds of inspiration, Dear!! Bellissimo, Secrets, Bellissimo!
xoxox
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Oh Chuck, an electric prod sounds painful π I’m almost sorry you connected with this piece, but seeds of inspiration… Turning your pain into art… That sounds like you ππ
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Yeah, But don’t poets write their best works in pain and loss?? Well, maybe not quite an electric prod. More like one of those electric probes they use in some brain surgeries that when they stimulate a spot you actually relive the memory – like that! Well, it’s good to make something out of pain, isnt it??
xoxox πππΉ
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Haha, absolutely π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and Enjoy This!
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Such sincere words! And it was a heart breaking read….
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Thank you Nathi πππ
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Youβre most welcome!!
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Questions so desperate in need of answers. Love has its way. In and out of it is human nature unless one gets to meet the one which never leaves no matter how hard you try to leave. π
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Yes! πππ
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