Nice one ST 🙌
Is this poem open to interpretation? Cuz there are two ways to go about it imo, one is like a cute way to interpret the losing our minds and the other not so good kind.
Hey Uzzawal, as always poetry is open to interpretation, which is what I love. Everyone connects to words differently, drawing on their own experiences and current outlook on life. I hesitate to share my own view of this one, because I like to leave it open, but I will today. This one was written as a cautionary tale. A while ago I wrote something about ‘bad boys’, this is essentially about ‘bad girls’.
Yeah, you are right, most of art is open to interpretation indeed. Ohh, yeah its cool that you are sharing your perspective on this one. Yeah I can understand that from the shows I have watched. For sure that caution is important.
Wow. This is really intense. This reminds me of a quote I recently heard: “A cage of gentle hands is still a cage” – Brenna Twohy. A bit of a different message than yours in my mind, but it’s amazing what we can overlook in relationships with ourselves and others. Great work!
Beautiful and intriguing poem, Secrets. open to interpretation indeed and the message clearly changes depending on the perspective you take. regardless, real love is not meant to enslave the receiver, no matter how soft the chain. I’d love to read the “bad boy perspective” one, i am sure that one is very relevant too.
thanks so much jst read it and posted a little comment there too.
you have beautiful, insightful and heartfelt poetry in this page.
they reflect the uncertainty and fragility of emotions so well, specially when threatened by lack of context, facts that are seen, facts that do not want to be seen.
the sadness of equivocal games and misunderstandings.
big packed loaded topic this love one.
Intense!
jst call me VB 😉
your words are beautiful and inspiring. inherently sad and hopeful and incongruous and loving at the same time. they do always sound like a soft and caressing whisper, nevertheless. keep writing. and recording.
Beautifully written
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Thank you so much Shweta 💜
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Nice one ST 🙌
Is this poem open to interpretation? Cuz there are two ways to go about it imo, one is like a cute way to interpret the losing our minds and the other not so good kind.
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Hey Uzzawal, as always poetry is open to interpretation, which is what I love. Everyone connects to words differently, drawing on their own experiences and current outlook on life. I hesitate to share my own view of this one, because I like to leave it open, but I will today. This one was written as a cautionary tale. A while ago I wrote something about ‘bad boys’, this is essentially about ‘bad girls’.
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Yeah, you are right, most of art is open to interpretation indeed. Ohh, yeah its cool that you are sharing your perspective on this one. Yeah I can understand that from the shows I have watched. For sure that caution is important.
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Haha, well just don’t go telling the others that I told you Uzzawal 😆
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Haha 😹
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Such powerful emotions captured so poignantly within your words. ❤️
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Thank you Rishika 💜
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This is deep, so deep!
I loved it!
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Why thank you so much! What an encouraging comment to read 💜
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A really intriguing title: the words counter each other. Good one!
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Oh thanks Ben. I always appreciate your unique insights 😀
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Welcome :)Really enjoy reading your work.
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Such a lovely poem. Beautiful and imaginative
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Thank you so much 😊
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I remember a Taylor Swift song. ‘I am a nightmare, dressed as a daydream’. So relates with the same.
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I love Taylor 💜 Haha, yes those daydream nightmares 😅🤣
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Haha 😉
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Wow. This is really intense. This reminds me of a quote I recently heard: “A cage of gentle hands is still a cage” – Brenna Twohy. A bit of a different message than yours in my mind, but it’s amazing what we can overlook in relationships with ourselves and others. Great work!
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Thanks Katy, that quote you mentioned is also incredibly powerful. Something to think on for sure. Thanks for your kind words 😊
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Sometimes those soft chains can strangle too. An intense piece S!
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Absolutely. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this one Radhika. 💜
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Beautiful and intriguing poem, Secrets. open to interpretation indeed and the message clearly changes depending on the perspective you take. regardless, real love is not meant to enslave the receiver, no matter how soft the chain. I’d love to read the “bad boy perspective” one, i am sure that one is very relevant too.
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Why thank you Vintage (what do you like being called). I agree with you 😊 The other poem is called ‘He’s no good’, I’ll past the link for you
https://secretthoughtswithin.com/2020/07/04/hes-no-good/
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thanks so much jst read it and posted a little comment there too.
you have beautiful, insightful and heartfelt poetry in this page.
they reflect the uncertainty and fragility of emotions so well, specially when threatened by lack of context, facts that are seen, facts that do not want to be seen.
the sadness of equivocal games and misunderstandings.
big packed loaded topic this love one.
Intense!
jst call me VB 😉
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Thanks VB, that’s so very kind of you to say! You blow me away with your kindness. I’m glad your heart connects with my words.
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your words are beautiful and inspiring. inherently sad and hopeful and incongruous and loving at the same time. they do always sound like a soft and caressing whisper, nevertheless. keep writing. and recording.
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Love the title, Dear! The message too! Hmm!
xoxox
😘💕🌹😁
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Thank you Chuck 💜💜💜
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