
Like stargazing—
the anticipation of discovery,
my bare skin lays before you.
Prepare your eyes to capture sights
others won’t see in the light of day.
My rubied freckles,
your personal constellations,
are often hidden from view.
But tonight,
I want you to find them.
Using the cosmic dust
sprinkled on my body,
navigate your way to a world
only we know.
Like a comet—
blaze across me,
leaving trails of fire and memories.
My delicate supernovas
await in your path for a kiss.
I wish on my trembling stars
for your fingers to circle and connect them
together with tongue-drawn lines.
Make sure to not leave one behind—
let them lead you around my curves.
I don’t want you to go astray.
I believe that they were put there
to help you find your way.
Ah… heavenly sparkles of love… beautiful ♥️💙
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Thank you for thinking so Radhika 😊 I like that phrase… ‘heavenly sparkles of love’ 💜
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Wow, Secrets. Brings back memories. Wish they were reality lol. So beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words 😊
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Oh Lorraine, what a comment to read! Thank you for your encouraging words. I’m also glad to hear you connected to it on a personal level 😊
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Yes, thankyou Secrets. I just wish it was true now though lol.
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I got the feeling of straightening the spine and let the electricity flow. Ah this was soothing. 😉 Felt your words.
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Oh how fabulous to hear. Yes, let that electricity flow 😉 Thank you Kritika 💜
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😉 (Heart)
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Beautifully written. I love how you drew parallels between love, stargazing, comets ..
Well penned, Secrets
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Thank you Shweta 😊
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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“Like a comet, blaze across me, Leaving trails of fire and memories”, beautiful metaphor ST! Such a well written poem! 🙌
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Thanks Uzzawal, your comment is making me smile 😊 I appreciate your kind words.
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This is so cool. Really adore this. This is awesome: “Prepare your eyes to capture sights
others won’t see in the light of day.” This, too: “tongue-drawn lines” and then just all of it. Fantastic poetry!
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It’s lovely to hear that you like this one Ben 😊 It’s amazing what can inspire any one piece of writing.
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It is: you’re right about that. What a pleasure to read!
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I love this! So beautiful and dazzling ❤️
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Oh Rishika, that is so great to hear 💜
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Beautiful 😍❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you Lovely 💜
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This is marvellous!
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Oh thank you so much 💜😊
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Mature Material: Wonderfully Written.
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this is so beautiful! I absolutely loved it 😘this is so beautiful 🙌😘😘
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Thank you so much Carol. That’s so kind of you to say.
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