Why did you have to be so confident?
So talented?
So intelligent?
I wasn’t looking for anyone to take up space in my heart
Yet you came along
Filling up the hollow expanse.
Why did you have to be so funny?
So understanding?
So authentic?
Why did you have to come along at all?
Without you I was doing alright
But now that I’ve met you I can’t imagine life on my own.
Oh why did you have to blow me away?
Love this!!!! 💙
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Thanks for saying so Patty, I appreciate hearing when someone connects to what I’ve written 🙂
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Some people tend to have that effect on us. But very few stay!
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Insightful observation Shweta, it can be true in some cases 😊
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Indeed. Beautifully written, ST 😀
I really enjoyed this one
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I’m so glad to hear that 🙂
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Haha, sounds wonderful! Well written ST 🙌
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Thank you Uzzawal 😊💜
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Ahh, some people come in our lives when we least expect it. Over time, staying becomes difficult, so they leave. The greatest mysteries of all time. Did they come only to leave? I love how you have written this! Relatable and beautiful.
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Oh, I like that thought… ‘Did they come only to leave?’ Thank you for your thoughts and encouragement 😊💜
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The last line is sensuous. 😉
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🤣🤣🤣😉
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Good one
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Thanks Nishabd 😁
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Keep writing . Your secret thoughts have good flavors
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Haha, I will 💜
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Why are you so good writer?😉
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😂😂😂😂
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Well said!
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Thank you for saying so Tanishq 😊
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hahaha yes yes why?
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It is a mystery 😆
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hahaha forever a mysteryyy
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It happens, and when it does we start focusing on the hows as much as the whys. I really like that ending because the narrator is perhaps being blown away in the sense they’ve become something new, let down their guard, opened up. But they are, too, impressed by the this person who has come into their life. This is a great feeling to have and always unexpected. Very relatable poem.
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Unexpected ‘great’ feelings are always the best kind right? They are the ‘desserts’ of life in my mind. Love your thoughts on this piece Ben 🙂
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this is so beautiful…
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Thank you for saying so Mich. Very encouraging 😊
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I knew you’d need me sooner or later. So I came as soon as I could. 😂😂
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Phew, I can relax now 🤣🤣🤣 Harsh, seriously this made me laugh 👏
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Glad to know that. That what my intention was. 😁
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Wow! that’s a powerful piece — but what a blessing that the person came along; and even if it didn’t work out, the journey would have been magical. I love the energy of this; Great last line 🙂
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Thanks John 💜
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Aww.. This is so adorable and sweet! 💞
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Thanks for Herl 😊💜
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Beautifully expressed!!
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Thank you for saying so 💜 It means so much.
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Ha! Yeah, the universe works that way sometime, for sure!! Minding your own business and then the one you can’t live without comes into your life!!! One of those fated, meant to be things!! Awesome post! So wonderfully romantic!! Loved the “leave me alone – don’t leave me”!!!
xoxo
😁😘💕😍🌹
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Thank you Chuck. Love your thoughts on this piece 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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