For every Haiku I show you, there are a hundred locked away.
For every sweet word I transcribe, there are thousands I don’t say.
For every emotion I rhyme, there are a million I keep at bay.
For every thought I express, there are trillions that go astray.
lovely!
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Thanks Reni 💜
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Wonderfully constructed…
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Oh thank you so much 🙂
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So much treasure to be looted
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Bahahaha, you always have those perfect ‘bad boy’ responses. Well done.
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Yes!!! THIS (I felt that)
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So nice to know isn’t it… that others feel/do the same. Thanks for sharing.
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Truly amazing in four lines you said a lot.
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Thank you Kritika 💜
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Always my pleasure 🙂 (Heart)
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Secret thoughts run deep. May we have more of that river… :)) 💛
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Difficult to know… We shall see 💜
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Open up, or I’ll have to break in.
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Haha 😂 No! 😜
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Poetical perfection!!! Sometimes we keep our deepest feelings “locked away” from everyone else. That was a really good title; it adds to the continuation of the story and doesn’t let the poem end on the last line. Very nice work.
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Oh thank you Ben! Sincerely, what an encouragement 😊
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Yes, I love the way you formed this one. It deserves high praise, for sure.
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Really, truly, thank you, it’s so kind of you to say.
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An amazing and a poetic reminder of what we think versus what we can put forth in front of an audience. There is a universe inside us and we come out as mere humans.
Nicely portrayed 🙌
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Thanks Uzzawal, ever the encourager 💜
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Oh, my dear such a sweet romantic poem…
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Thank you Mich 💜
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So true and so succinct 🙂
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Thanks John 😊
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Wow this is fabulous
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I’m glad you thought so 😊💜
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My absolute pleasure
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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i can relate hahaha
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Haha, woohoo 😅😂😂😂
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